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The Boy That Could Write Poetry

Beth Gottfried

My 11-year-old nephew wrote the poem below. Read and be amazed and then search within yourself for such depth. I dare you.

by Joshua Hollander

Glistening in the sunshine,
Half hidden in the trees,
Toressent’s Pond’s murky, moldy green waters
Still gleamed miraculously and beautifully on that distinguishing never-ending day
The emerald liquid revealed her reflection
She was so somnolent-looking,
With the light satchel consistently drooping to her waist.
Her name was Urea
An ethereal name,
as ethereal as the woman that was emerging from the water.
For the past seven years she had been trying to get out
To see the glorious world around her
And that day just happened to be today.


Beth Gottfried

Beth Gottfried Lisogorsky is a professional blogger whose work has appeared on numerous sites from Rotten Tomatoes to PopMatters. She loves film, TV (yes "the boob tube"), and music and has critiqued on all three. In 2004, she published a book


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Anonymous


A lovely poem. But maybe he should be more careful in the names he chooses? "Urea" is an organic compound better known as the precursor to urine.





Anonymous


Or maybe he's just 11 year-old boy who has written a clever poem about pee, I don't know.





cshefman


Wow.. That's a smart 11 year old.

I had took up what "somnolent"  means... to induce a heavy sleep.





Anonymous


This is amazing.